The overall numbers on offense looked fine but there were still way too many instances where this offense came into games and played flat, uninspired football for almost the entire 1st half of games; particularly against teams with records above .500. Also, the situational play calling was too hit or miss. I want to see improvement in those areas.
Kellen Moore may very well develop into one the game's next great offensive-minded coaches.....I just prefer that he earn the job through his own hard work and acumen. Right now he's being handed promotions similar to Garrett. He was given the QB coach and OC jobs without having to interview for them and there were no other coaches brought in to interview for those jobs. Nope....it was another case of Jerry Jones inserting someone into a position of authority primarily because he liked them. Jerry could care less if better and more qualified coaching candidates were available.
Sports are supposed to be a meritocracy and the organizations that understand and practice this are the ones winning most of the championships.
Your observation of the teams overall lack of enthusiasm and lack of a sense of urgency is correct but I am not sure you can attribute all that to the offensive coordinator. The coordinators job is the planning and execution of the games strategy. To a degree the Coordination personally deals with the execution of the players but a lot of that goes to assistants and position coaches.
The attitude and urgency aspect is primarily in the hands of the HC.
Everyone seemed puzzled that Dallas led the league in offense but was only a 500. team. The defense was the largest factor in game losses IMO because of the reactionary schemes and alignments. Almost any team could retain ball possession who could complete 5 yard passes with consistency and a running attack that averaged 3 yards a carry. It was terribly loose defense and first downs were easy to get. Rarely did Dallas use a press formation but when they did it wasn’t consistent.
All that to say that Moore is young and he was promoted from within but he has the background to handle the job and again I think teams offensive production is a good indicator of a lot his influence.